by javmor79
Jav, you'll probably get a whole lot more comments like the one from the idiot below who calls you dumb then demonstrates who's really dumb by calling the MC a cuck, which is actually the only negative thing that doesn't apply to him. The MC in this story is what we in the UK call an 'absolute wanker' and gets everything he deserves. I wouldn't pee on someone like him if he were on fire! Good luck to the long suffering Chris in her future life.
I'm going to do something I virtually never do, leave feedback without reading the entire story. Once I got a picture of what a pompous, self-absorbed asshat the MC was, I just stopped. Not worth my time to continue, and I shouldn't have taken the time to even write this, but I needed you to know I didn't have a happy experience here at Lit this time around.
Just goes to show lawyers are often egostastical selfish bastards. Hope the wife does better now that he's history.
A beautiful story of a lawyer getting his just desserts. He came across as a total scumbag. Well written
Powerful. My question is why was he crying at the end. He had not cared for her for months at least. He should have been indifferent at the end or angry that something he thought was his got away.
@calico: where did you get the impression that he didn’t care? It’s obvious throughout the entire story that he does care, just in a fucked up way.
This is unfortunately not uncommon on the real world, where the cheater cannot see what they do as wrong, but are ready to crucify their spouse if they are cheating and are overly suspicious.
i seriously didn't see that coming . the focus was on him and his perspective in the beginning .
Treat your wife like piece of property and sooner or later she'll take it back. Husband is getting what he wants, freedom, just not how he wanted it.
You wrote a great story about a man that thought too much of himself. 5 stars from Xluckylee.