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Click hereI was spent after that and pulled out from under her, I watched as my wife bucked back every time Steven thrust forward, he was pounding her pussy and she was loving it.
"Fuck me Steven, fuck my tight wet pussy." She cried out while not taking her eyes off me.
Steven flipped her over on her back and shoved his cock back into her waiting cunt, Selina wrapped her legs behind his back and pulled him in deeper. He bent down and was sucking her tits while pumping into her. I saw Selina's eyes start to roll back and knew that she was heading for another orgasm.
"Fuck me harder!" Selina yelled, "Fuck my pussy, while Ben Watches."
Steven got that look in his eye and I knew that they were both reaching the point of no return. The sight of my wife and brother in law both reaching orgasm with each other was fantastic, Selina came first with Steven blasting his load deep into her womb shortly after. I watched the pair as they came down from their orgasmic high. I moved over to my wife and lay down beside her, she snuggled into me and I kissed her.
"So that was fun." I quipped.
We all laughed and got dressed, Steven went to grab the lines in from the water's edge, while Selina and I packed up the blanket and cooler.
"Did you enjoy that?" I asked, knowing her response.
"Uh Huh." She giggled, "Did you?"
"More than enough to ask if you would like to try it again." I replied.
"Id like to try it again." She said, "But next time I want you to fuck me as well, I want to feel my husband's cock fill me up too."
We both smiled as we all headed home, knowing that this will happen again.
This did happen again, not often, we have been married 15 years and I guess this has happened 4 times since that night. The last time was with one of her girlfriends, but I will save that for another time.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoDespite the criticism still an enjoyable read. Not all people who share their experiences are good writers. Keep sharing and do the best that you can. Use some of the volunteer writers to help proof your work. Now your challenge is to get your sister involved. The next taboo. Good luck and share your other encounters.
Anonymousover 9 years agoCan't really add anything to the existing criticism. Why did you write this? About as erotic as watching paint dry.
Anonymousover 9 years agoTry and concentrate on making the best big mac you can.
thecarolinadreamerover 9 years agoYep, your story had all the shortcomings mentioned, but I enjoyed it anyway. There is one constructive criticism I have to offer. Stick to one viewpoint; don't write 1st person (I did thus etc.) and then let your "I" know what another person feels without that person telling him. For that, you must write 3rd person unlimited view point. AKA the God viewpoint. Then your character can know everything about anybody.
Good luck with your writing.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYeah, that was my immediate thought. At no point was it established that his sister was into sharing. Even if this comes out in a later chapter, too little, too late. He fucked over his sister, plain and simply.
Tw0Cr0wsover 9 years ago" I am married to a beautiful woman of 15 years"
That way of saying it usually means someone who is 15 years old, not someone who has been married for 15 years.
Please find an editor fluent in English if you insist on writing in it.
Anonymousover 9 years agoSo this guys get's his sisters husband to cheat and betray his own sister. That's the bad thing about these cuck stories. The people in them are too depraved and it's all about getting off and being a pervert so all morals and principals go out the window. The bottom line is this guy just fucked over his SISTER! Dude you lied to and betrayed your sister. Seriously....your sister!?!?
Anonymousover 9 years agoNothing new here, same ol'e, same ol'e. Sentence structure is terrible. Many run-on sentences that should have been broken up into 2 or 3 instead of 1.
All in all, a pretty poor effort. 3*s is the best I can do.
