All Comments on 'Serious Quickie Mishap in Las Vegas'

Not here. Gay and rape don't belong.

fag cuck shit.

Burn The Bitch lovers will love this story.Thanks for sharing

They're too butt hurt over their wives leaving their pathetic souls so they come here to vent on easy targets. They only think in black and white, no pun intended. They cannot conceive of people living other lifestyles and being okay.

Fuck em. Keep writing. The story was hot.

"Holding up his cell phone, he said, I need it on tape. Speak up Chink slut, do you want us to fuck you?'"

Hey moron she's not Chinese

No. This is just dumb cuck crap vomited into the wrong section. It's a fetish, stop trolling and take it there like the good little cum slut you are.

An ass-in-nine story about plastic characters. ? Who cares what happens to them anyway? Save your time and use it to take a writing class.

The constant use of the & sign is just lazy writing.

not able to be believed it is so unlikely to find two security guards willing to rape a guest on their employers property. Just write it as fiction, you will not be treated so harshly by commenters. I do agree that non consent and gay are two better categories.

Yes, I agree, what's the "&" sign all about. Never ever have seen it used this often before. Who thought you to write, very juvenile. Just skimmed through this, very irritating to read. Better luck next time. Sorry. Hot? Not in my world.

Did it never occur to him to call the cops and have them charged, at the very least, with the theft of his cell phone? What there was of this poorly done story just didn't amount to much. It was neither sexy, erotic or interesting. The characters seemed to have the IQ of a rock. Not even good for a jack off story. Get an editor and try again. This was simply badly conceived and poorly written. PS - Drop the "true" story tag. You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth and all the "true" tag does is make us laugh at you.

1 star only because negative stars aren't available - yet.

All said by @patillie...1*

Some of these "anonymous" commenters are SO conflicted the only thing they can see in your story is how it makes THEM very uncomfortable.

You went to a lot of trouble to write the story and are trying to get your feet on the ground.

When I was in college and again 20 years later in life, I was the 'bull' in several cuckold relationships where I had hubby lick my cum out of his cute, eager wife's oozing vagina. The scene was always VERY hot and she and I would sometimes orgasm just by dominating hubby and making him perform homo type acts that he wouldn't perform voluntarily. Having him on his knees in front of me or with his mouth between the legs of his freshly fucked wife was a HUGE turn on for both her and I.

You need to describe this electricity in the air the first time you are made to perform oral sex on a man and woman who just exploded in the heat of orgasm. What's it like for you to have your wife eagerly positioning herself so you can suck the sticky, gooey semen out of her just stretched vagina. A lot of semen leaks down over her asshole. What's it like for you to lick that up while she squirms in pleasure at your humiliation at my hands.

Give us more. I don't care about the plausibility of the storyline, I care about the reality of the scene. You are submitting to your wife's bull AND her. She is now on board with the role of mistress and you slave. Most of the time the role ends when I walk out the door and go home after several orgasms but sometimes I have had wifey continue with the role and not let you fuck her anymore; you can only eat her.

Anyway, keep writing, don't let these assholes get you down.

Not "angry" are you? Must kill you to realize not everybody is as stupid as you.

Another bullshit attempt at "kink" in Vegas. Talk about BS... REAL doctors are intelligent enough to know about security as well as "payoffs". This is such a WEAK and lame background it is rather upsetting.

Good story line. Would love more detailed descriptions about each "adventure".

Keep writing.

fag cuck shit.

Glad that you both enjoyed the adventure.

Sounds like the assholes are getting you down though. They must be doing something right.

Just get arrested. What the hell.