All Comments on 'Serviced At Sea'

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
dam dam double mmmmmmmmmmmmm

Very erotic story. Good job for a first....nice to read in the morning...... Should I be looking for a part 2 as the cruise isn't over yet????

JonloggerJonloggerabout 9 years ago
Great to have you back

Brilliant as usual just cant wait for more and the return of the wonderful randy Wendy would be a bonus

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Needs an editor

Good story, but you need a translator. It was too distracting. How many times can you omit a "the"? Maybe you're using Google Translate

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Part 2

Would you do a part two to this story? There is still a few days left.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Hoping for a second part, for sure!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
An editor

will make this easier to read - page one was so difficult, I gave up on the rest....

John558John558about 9 years ago
PLEASE

Can we have a 2nd chapter and can Stella get with Chuck?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A second part

Be great to have a second part to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Glad to see you back

I missed your great stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wish there was a follow up

I visit your page every none and then hoping for another story. Good descriptions and well written story - thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
good story

I hope there would be more chapters about the hot blond wife, she has many more days on the ship. I think there can be more adventures with her i.e. with her son, other men or couples.

I would appreciate if there are more stories about her.

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

been better if she ended up with a gangbang

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