All Comments on 'Serving a Dominant Couple Pt. 01'

The story was basically, I did this, then I did this, then I did this. I think it would be more interesting if we understood Thomas and Nancy's motivations better, and if we knew about your main character's emotions when he was experiencing when he was going through what he went through. There was more going through his mind than 'it was big, and I was choking'.

Excellent start though!

Decent story. I think you meant enema, not Elena!

Yes your a bi slut. Willing to drop to your knees to suck cock, ass up to be fucked. And to do anything for the dominate female. This couple needs to lock your clit up in chastity. You need not worry about orgasms from now on. Just blue balls and dripping goo from your cage. A true slut is born.

not bad