All Comments on 'Serving a Dominant Couple Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Part 2?

I'm a little disappointed that is ended after Part 2 and that perhaps Part 3 would have lead to the sub moving in as a "Full Time" sub.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Better

This was better than a very decent part one. I agree with others that the story could have continued.

devilspydevilspyabout 8 years ago
Sharing bi slut

Sub bi slut is used by all. Oh if only his clit was locked in chastity. Painfully trying to get hard as his blue balls leak goo. Drip and leak as he is fucked.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Correct Grammar

Group, there is no such word as "grinded on my face". The correct word is "ground". Many of the writers misuse the word.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More worrisome

Is the general idea of the word ground (or grinded😉) within the same sentence as the word breast. Umm. Ouch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Too rushed but decent premise ......

All the horny was rushed ..

Slow it down with more detail pllease

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