All Comments on 'Seth's New Life'

I want more :-). This story is already hot and exciting.

Please, get an editor.

Good add more and it'll be great... But it sounds nice and sexy so far

I want more please!

i think you often mean seconds but say minutes. Unless this is happening in slow motion. Also, if he is so submissive why the threat with the knife? That doesn't mean submission voluntarily but by terror. That's not fun.

BDSM stands for Bondage & Discipline / Domination & Submission / Sadism & Masochism.

This story is on Wattpad, word for word, so either you're stealing somebody's stuff or vise versa, idk....

You can't write

Finally someone is opening their eyes to the real BDSM that truly exists. Frankly I am quite surprised that the BDSM hierarchy have not put a hit out on your life. I won't say which way i'm leaning!