All Comments on 'Seth's New Life'

A nice start. You do need someone to edit your punctuation. It's kind of hard to read as it is.

Finally someone is opening their eyes to the real BDSM that truly exists. Frankly I am quite surprised that the BDSM hierarchy have not put a hit out on your life. I won't say which way i'm leaning!

You can't write

This story is on Wattpad, word for word, so either you're stealing somebody's stuff or vise versa, idk....

BDSM stands for Bondage & Discipline / Domination & Submission / Sadism & Masochism.

i think you often mean seconds but say minutes. Unless this is happening in slow motion. Also, if he is so submissive why the threat with the knife? That doesn't mean submission voluntarily but by terror. That's not fun.

I want more please!

Good add more and it'll be great... But it sounds nice and sexy so far

Please, get an editor.

I want more :-). This story is already hot and exciting.