by HotDirtyFuzz
I love the story but would enjoy it much more if you were to loosen the laws of Rivergate a little more (outdoor sex) and make the sex a little more casual - an image springs to mid of Angie walking away from the scene with cum dribbling from her ass down her legs... A kind of whatever attitude to multiple partners positions (which would make sense in a city where sex is so frequent).
Hi
Thank you for the suggestion, I'm definitely going to look into that. I made the mistake of rushing through it (I got that excited :) )