All Comments on 'Sex Slave Ch. 07'

I'm really enjoying the way this story examines issue of control and submission to that control. Sounds dry, I know, but I enjoy that sort of complexity in a story and characters. It's not just the action, it's what bubbles beneath the surface. Master Rim is fascinating. He's a vile human being and yet... I'm not quite sure what to make of him. All of your characters display enormous humanity and emotional depth, and I'm hooked on finding out how their tales resolve.

The story does have twists and turns that keep it interesting. The eventual outcome will be interesting and may have surprises for the principles as well as the antagonist. It is a clever story, I look forward to future installment(s) to come.

when it posted! Wonderful, as always. I can't wait to see what happens with these characters :)

Once again, I'm at the edge of my seat wanting more. Keep it up!!!

i see nothing at all wrong with your writing. i am enjoying this series as much as any i have ever read.