All Comments on 'Sexcapades on a Plane'

Well done! Take your time, let it build a little. It is ok to show the woman's side also, like you would feel. Enjoyed it. Keep writing.

For your first effort I thought it was excellent! If you wish to submit very short stories this was a good format. You show great promise so go ahead and fill in more detail as you go. Liked it very much.

Well done ...More??