by StoryofC
This is great. From the first story I am not quite sure why this is in the nonconsent category, but I'm assuming this will have a sequel?
I really did love this story and I hope there's more :)
I've been reading literotica.com for years, but I've never been moved to leave a comment. This really does sound like the beginning of one of the erotic novels I like to buy from Amazon. I can only imagine what sexcapades the professor, Rae, Chloe, and the mysterious man behind her will get into! Can't wait to read more, StoryofC!
The only thing I have trouble with for this story is the constant shifting in verb tense.
The concept is fantastic, and I hope we get to see the rest of the semester.
*smiles* Yummy.... looking forward to the next chapter because this story is screaming for a followup. Excellent details... Keep up the great writing.
Thank you everyone for the feedback! I reread the submitted text and realized I copied and pasted the unedited version. I apologize severely and will be more careful with the next chapter. Bad grammar can detract from a story.
I also placed this in nonconsent/reluctance to play out Chloe's hesitance in the next chapters.
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment.
She is about to both lose herself and find herself in this class. The question is will the professor be the one to collar her or will it be her classmate..