by HornyPup
Guess I've got serious issues then. My 2nd sexual experience (after cumming prematurely with my prom date) was a rape by the ranger at a summer wilderness experience when I was in college. It was violent and rough, but the guy apologized profusely when I confronted him a couple of days and at least tried to make it up to me the rest of the summer. One of those make ups was a long sexual night where I was still the bottom, but not abused.
I'm bisexual, married to a very strong woman who, yes, tops me regularly whether I'm penetrating her or she's penetrating me. And every now and then I find a rough stud to take me back to my darkest and happiest place.
wow i am in shock of this one. i was feeling what these gals were doing to those guys and my ass is virgin
Loved the story, definitely see the potential for a follow-up...especially since Jordana hasn't gotten a chance to play yet. Maybe use two darts on the next guy - one that temporarily paralyzes and the other that causes blindness for a couple of days (an extract from the plants you mentioned). Then they could do some face-fucking with him, keeping him in a clearing and abusing him in different ways until it was time to "rescue" him. Anyway, loved the story and would enjoy seeing more.
Ok, LOVED the concept; reasonably well thought out, good writing style, the action moves along at a satisfying pace (He, he,) the language was extrordinarily vivid without wending too far into the SiFi relm, the interactions between the characters were amusing_ BUTT (He, he,) A predator hanging upside down and lowering herself down a vine then somehow swinging to impail her victim with one quick and savage thrust right on "Target"_ Well, I'd have to see that to believe it! Over all: 5 for dramatic, and a 4 for erotic quality. Maybe seeing some aftereffects on the victims once they are released would do the do the trick?