All Comments on 'Shadow-Cat'

The story line is promising, but please work on your grammar and punctuation - the story is almost unreadable, because of it.

Totalll agree with the previous comment. The plot line has a lot of potential to become a brilliant story, but your grammar and punctuation are horrible. Have you thought about finding an editor? It always helps to have another look at the draft.

and i cant wait to read more of it!!

Hope you'll make this a nice long series!

I'm sorry, but I tried to keep reading this, I really did, but the grammar and punctuation, not to mention the constantly disrupted flow of the story, just kept me from enjoying it at all. It has a fair storyline from where I stopped reading but it's just too choppy and broken up. Maybe if you got an editor then it would be much better.

Hahahahaha... kecghs..... hehehe

try to put in titles(or a title) for every new part of the story...and the story seems to be talking too much nonsense..