All Comments on 'Shadows and Light Ch. 14'

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I hope there's a happy ending for all of the couples.

Please don't kill Ian...Please Please Please

You're a fabulous writer and I've enjoyed this story from the beginning. However, your introduction coupled with the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter left me confused and more than a little frustrated. Of course it's still unclear, but I'd hate to see Ian killed off as he's a main character. It's also YOUR story and I respect that, too.

I anxiously await the next installment to see how this unfolds. And as always, thanks for sharing your stories!

Yeah I hate it that authors do that to!! There is no reason to kill anyone. I am sure you can come up with some other way. By the way. If the father is older ect... I think he should come save his boys!!! For once let him show how much he loves them! I know you CAN DO THIS!! PRETTY PLEASE!!

and hopefully this will be revealed in the next chapter. Finn? Simon? Ian? Isabelle? Your writing is top rate, even if I don't want the events to unfold as they are. It really is a story of shadows and light, and this is definitely one of the darker chapters. Write on and bring us back into the light.

But very well done.

the last comment has put me off.? i will read it when its day light.? lol

I`m not a homophobe but please for fuck sake place a warning at the beginning of the 1st chapter that this story is a gay one. I don`t want to read gay porn, and after getting hooked with the story I find myself either abandoning a good story with out knowing its end, or having to read GAY PORN !!!

Indicate if there will be a homosexual scene, love the story but now I'm weirded out.