All Comments on 'Shadows of the Moon Ch. 05'

I am always so happy to see a post of this story...and then I hate it when I reach the last page and it is like "Nooooo.... I want more!!"

Thank you for sharing

Lucy need to tone down the hostility. They saved her and her daughter's asses and she want to have an attitude. Why didn't she go crazy on those fools when they took Natalie. If Liam and the guys wanted to cause her harm they would've already.

This story has really taken off quite nicely.

I feel like this story line has been done to death, wolf finds human mate, human mate runs away, wolf finds her, all the while she doesn't know what the fuck he is with some bad men after her ALL the time for something or other.

please hurry with the next chapter. i love it!

10 days or so between posts. Hope you are able to keep to that sequence. Hope I can wait that long! Enjoying the story:) Don't listen to the been-there-done-that people.

I just came across this story line and I cant wait to read more of it!

I've read through these comments, and I've read through your story. I am a writer on wattpad, I know the difficulties of people saying 'This story is less than mediocre, or I love this story' People are opinionated, and simply want to make themselves feel better. I for one adore your story. Don't let them bring you down. You have an undoubtedly large amount of potential. Best wishes, Elisa

This is going along very nicely in my opinion. Keep the events and intrigue at the level they are now and this should have all sorts of interest shown. As well as that high reader satisfaction will be a given.

I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter. I hope they get rid of Lucy soon, she's annoying & she abandoned her kids.

*Edit Suggestion:

change "aflame" to "on fire" as in, "set the house on fire."

Aflame works just as well as on fire. It means the same thing.