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"I'm not going anywhere with you!" Lucy hissed defensively.
"Yes we are mom." Natalie interjected before Dael could answer. "I want to hear what they have to say."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 10 years agoGreat chapter. I hope they get rid of Lucy soon, she's annoying & she abandoned her kids.
*Edit Suggestion:
change "aflame" to "on fire" as in, "set the house on fire."
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThis is going along very nicely in my opinion. Keep the events and intrigue at the level they are now and this should have all sorts of interest shown. As well as that high reader satisfaction will be a given.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI've read through these comments, and I've read through your story. I am a writer on wattpad, I know the difficulties of people saying 'This story is less than mediocre, or I love this story' People are opinionated, and simply want to make themselves feel better. I for one adore your story. Don't let them bring you down. You have an undoubtedly large amount of potential. Best wishes, Elisa
