All Comments on 'Sharing My Wife Amanda Ch. 10'

So... I accidentally submitted this story under "Group Sex" when it should've been under "Romance".

I apologize to anyone who bothers to read this. -Syzoth

The writing quality is progressively improving with each chapter. The dialogue is more natural and the writing flows more smoothly. Enjoyable read. I must say, young Amanda is quite versatile!

Really like your writing style, its easy to read and to understand and best of all it makes me invision it like it is with me and my wife.

Keep up the good work give Mandy an extra hard pump with lots of feeling from me. Lol

Beautiful, well-written, romantic story! I wish they could all be like this!

As I read through the story, I pondered what it would have been to have a more experienced lover like Mandy in my early 20s and what would have been the impact in my life today. Hummmm, i wonder. ;)

For me, an amateur photographer, the story took a particular sexy turn with the photo shoot. I enjoyed reading that part immensely.

I also agree with the other comments, Syzoth’s writing has gradually improved.

After 10 chapters, Mandy and her hubby now feel like regular people who are exchanging saucy details about their everyday life with their readers.

I am almost sad this saga is coming to a close as I have grown attached to these two.

V.

As I woman, I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I wasn't expecting it to touch upon the fears women experience as we age, and the exhilaration we feel when we attract younger, good-looking men! I would've liked to have read more about those themes before this story became a full-on smut, but not bad for a male author trying to capture the feminine viewpoint.