All Comments on 'Shattered'

Bunch of fucking weirdos.....

@bacchant2 what are you even talking about? That has nothing to do with this story whatsoever.

Are cuckold fantasies really that common? I mean, I know porn nowadays seems to be rife with it, but I don't actually think that's because anybody did an exhaustive study of user preference.

I'd have to see some actual hard data, and not some wishful Gen Z proselytizing that monogamy is outdated and unnatural.

Personally, I can't see cuckolding as anything other than harmful to society as well as the individual person.

Never one of my fantasies. Matter of fact I really don’t have any fantasies. So I don’t care for thid at all.

Bill S.

I written about people cheating on each other but i find it sick when a guy gets off on prostituting his wife to someone else. Its a perversion that goes too far, denegrates women and makes the men just one step up from men who prey on young boys and girls.

Well written, all in all. My only opinion is that whatever cheating results in, you need to be all in with your decision. If you choose to forgive and reconcile, then do it. Don't hold it over your spouse's head, or it will inevitably end in divorce anyway. If you choose divorce, don't lead your spouse on by giving them hints at hope. Get out. Btb if need be, but there's no need to be a snowflake. I won't comment on the cuckold part, that's not my thing, other than to say at least it wasn't like the typical cuck stories I've ran across on here. Usually, the woman has sex with another guy, suddenly realizes that she's a whore for everyone but her husband, then ends up getting gangbanged by a bunch of her lover's friends. Simultaneously, the husband is usually a big ol pussy that doesn't realize that she doesn't even love or really even like him, other than treating him like a piece of shit in front of others or the financial comfort he offers. So good job at avoiding that.

Alright I totally agree with having fantasies… but this goes a little beyond that. In my opinion at least. I seriously thing these guys need to try sky diving or something. My theory is that they are borderline adrenaline junkies and the high they get from the pleasure/humiliation combo is the closest thing they get in their mundane lives, to some serious wicked shit. So who wants to tell me I’m a complete dumbass for even thinking this? Like try and imagine these dudes in their life, I sure as shit don’t imagine them as very adventurous people. So who wants to point out how ridiculous I sound and what a dumb ass comment this is hahaha

Rich is a wimp and a giant pussy. He can’t even get a hard on unless he is imagining some other guy fucking his wife. The nasty ass skank wife fucks other guys and Rich the pussy blames himself. The only reason for the skank to fuck around is because bitch boy Rich couldn’t get the job done. Willing cuckolds are the lowest form of life and deserve to be married to cheating skanks.

Hominids of various species have been documented to lose interest in a potential mate, if they witness them getting banged by another male. It's both amusing and disturbing how this warped culture of ours, has turned something rejected by our very DNA to fetish fuel.

Interesting that you wrote the final cheating scene in a way that could be interpreted as real, not a fantasy. Did she fuck some one else before he got home or didn't she ?

Hard to tell who the man or women is in this woeful drivel. He must have been raised by lesbians.

I find it difficult to accept that Brad, a rapists name if ever there was one, would imagine that he could get away with carrying through his blackmail threats on a friend/colleague of his aunt's. While I can totally see him making blackmail threats, the belief that carrying them out in this specific case wouldn't have potentially serious consequences just seems overly stupid and reckless.

Nice examination of the difference between fantasy and reality. Far too many people don't quite understand that while it's possible to fantasise about something the reality can turn out to be the opposite of expectations.

I find the American porn cuckold fantasy to be one of those. Though I do wonder how many ppl actually imagine they're the 'bull' rather than the 'cuck' and get off on the idea of humiliating someone else rather than being the one humiliated. Traditionally in Europe, it's the high powered business 'bulls' that seek humiliation at the hands of a dominatrix rather than the sad weak everyman of America seeking humiliation from their wife and her lover. But I guess everyone to their own. Live and let live.

He was not normal ... sort of scary ... he warped her view of reality.

Wedłyd mnie kolejne opowiadanie dla idiotow i mieczaków pisane przez sfustrowane osoby

Not just to cuckolding fantasies. Don't understnd them, but I recognize that the human psyche is highly complex and varied across the species. Buy somehow this worked. It was a reconciliation with a strange road traveled buy by no means a RAAC. She really screwed up. The first time she was really drunk and lost the separation between fantasy and reality. Buy the second time, 2 weeks later was bad. By then she did not really enjoy it. She got turned on by the sleep mask bit, but then Brad started to be too forceful and showed his selfish asshole side. She was done with him. And guilt had finally set in. The excuse that her husband was away on trip and she was horny was lame. She wasn't drunk. She planned it and did it, and the reality of it finally hit her and she stopped. Asshole tried to blackmail her, though she didn't know about the photos. Suspect even if he discussed the photos, she would have gotten even more pissed off and talked to Allison for help. There is no doubt she did the crime. But unlike many of the loving wives on this siglte, when her husband was emailed those pictures, she owned up to it. His reaction confused her, but she didn't shirk the fact that she had been a selfish, self centered bitch. Everything about possible reconciliation depends on the circumstances. Took him a while to realize that he wasn't at fault, though part of him always will think that at least a little. The emotional conversations back and forth were well written. The counselor was actually blunt and helpful. Was a torturous path but they made it work in the end. Again she did something heinous and hurtful, especially the second time, and she eviscerated his self confidence and his trust, but through the lens of his own fantasies. But afterwards, seeing her reaction to his pain, and her deep regret, as well as her self analysis, it is hard to see a situation where she ever does that again, under any circumstances. People can change, provided that something apocalyptic happens, and that certainly was the case here. The age difference and his own blame that he heaped on himself bought her time to be with him even if barely as a couple, to slowly resuscitate their relationship. Seriously, if no reconciliation is warranted for these two, then it is should never be warranted for anyone. After ge betrayal she did everything right. She did not lie. Did not soft sell it. Owned what she did and accepted her guilt. Was patient with him, so he could get out from his guilt. Did counseling, first joint, then solo. Endured his (eventual) anger. Worked at fighting for her marriage but using love and tenderness. Sought to communicate. Used sexual healing (i.e. blowjob therapy). And much more. Cheating is always bad. For many reasons. But this seemed like a crazy edge case that could be reconciled. Most cases of cheating, do not warrant reconciliation and should not be, often creating a bigger mess. Glad these two made it. Cuckold fantasies are still not remotely might cup of tea. People are strange.

All this writer's MCs are CUVKS. Thry are weak pathetic assholes who reconciles with the cheaying skank wives

Trailer park white trash

An interesting story. I found it disturbing but very readable. The premice of an older guy with the insecurities he had about his age, his fantasy, and the actual affair made a witches brew of emotions which was well mapped out and made sense. Then the change of fantasy at the end which altered his perception and allowed him to live with it. All very nicely done.

Thanks for your time and effort. I always appreciate all the work you authors put into these stories, and then publish them for free.

It made me uncomfortable by the end. But the truth is that Ohio is one of the few authors on the site who deals with the fact that different humans have different things going on, and that things can get complicated over time and go in directions we don't necessarily like. He does it not making fun of people, or playing up to stereotypical disgust. He tries things out. He also actually writes stories that are about the infidelity and the interactions over it without dragging in page after page about some construction project or whatever (I think a few authors do this well, but in most cases I have come to find it really tedious). His work is admirable.

Because cuckolding goes against every good virtuous trait real men have, even insinuating a man wants to do it "for starters no real man does" and saying it is a direct insult to all men, it just ruins stories because we can't relate or respect anybody of less than zero class, honor, virtue or self-respect. So you might as well have the MC as a 2 headed 3 dick having alien because that is how relatable it is to "real" men

I don’t like cuck stories even if just a fantasy. This was disturbing today the least.

Bill S.

Well written story as usual. really didn’t like it. Must be something wrong with me not a fantasy I have ever had at 50+ years of age.

The counselor was an idiot. Fantasies about others is cheating.

Think of the pain bot foolishly suffered.

somethings off, either w/ me or w/ the rest of the world. Have read that spouses often ask their partner if they ever think or fantasize about others when loving/ fucking each other. I fantasize plenty about lots, but have never fantasized about someone else when in the saddle(even w/ pros, its them im thinking about, not who they might be, who they resemble, whatever). So why would others be thinking of fucking some actress instead of the one they are fucking? Maybe im to reality based but i can separate fantasy from actuality and dont never mix them up. If im fucking someone, great, dont need to imagine fucking someone else to make the current fucking mighty fine. Not geared towards acting, i wouldnt know how to act as a wanna be cuckold or finding and facing a cheating wife w/ a cum filled cunt. Do know that i have anger and trust issues and a short trigger pull, combined w/ some self control problems that in real life would put people in danger, including myself, in these "role playing"scenarios. Not saying if it works for others to not do, but not my style, and maybe my rigidity means im missing something or maybe not getting the biggest bang for my orgasm? So not able to empathize w/ the problems created and experienced in thew story. Do empathize in general w/ the angst the male feels about his manliness.rk

Not the kind of fantasy I am into, but this story is so beautifully written that I enjoyed all of it. Thank you!

Hey Ohio, send me your wife and I'll make all your dreams come true lol

Not every story Ohio has on Literotica is cuck nonsense (most are), but this story certainly is.

Author back to their favourite cream filled Cuck stories. What always cracks me up is they dress up the Guys to act and look like normal guys but ultimately their all cream filled Cuck Donuts🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

He's NUTS! And all this crap might bite him in the ass again someday.

interesting. "Be careful what you wish for"

Who was that whacko ranting about 'immaturity', 'taking the Lord's name in vain' and 'judgement day' and why would he even be on a website like this one in the first place? It frightens me that people like that are allowed out unsupervised. Like all Ohio stories this one was well written, exploring a complex aspect of human nature and I could perceive no wrongdoing on the part of the author to merit such a fire and brimstone barrage as that meted out by the disgruntled anon.

I think the writing is a really good and made a great effort of exploring the emotional difficulties with dealing with fantasy, reality, and how it impacts a relationship.

WIMPY CUCK WRITER AND A CUCK STORY

Very nicely written, but I didn’t care for the story line. Definitely two(2) fucked up people.

Enjoyed this for the second time. Thanks for your writing.

There are two components that make up every score: the writing and the story. If the writing is good, but the story sucks, then you get a low score. Sorry, but we're not here to grade for correct use of commas and quotations. We want a good story.

I Couldn’t get this one out of my head.once on a 2 week bus trip out west we were proposed by a very nice looking couple. Y first thought was how nice the wife looked followed immediately by the thought of he & my wife getting it on.

Killed any sexual idea of a swap instantly when I thought of my wife with another man.

Stopped imagining that right away & decided that I didn’t even want to think about it.

So, for me this was as bad as imagining me in a homosexual encounter. Not in this lifetime.

Bill S

This, in my opinion, was one of this author's best stories. Some of the comments are truly amusing- this is a story, not a case history. It illustrates how a fictional couple dealt with the husband's psychology; that there are men like this is indisputable, and I found it interesting and enlightening to learn about an aspect of sexuality that is foreign to me. Remember, there is nothing wrong with what two consenting adults do in their marriage. We all have different needs and desires and it is probably healthier to openly communicate and deal with them than not. Bravo to Ohio for being willing to take all the time and effort to explore aspects of human sexuality in all of his works. I have learned a lot.

I wish that Literotica would change it's scoring system. So many commenters score it a 1, since they don't like the subject matter. I don't either, but can easily recognize top quality writing. So.... writing- 5, content- 1; average- 3? Way too low. So I give it a 4, but feel Mr. Ohio's been cheated because of my personal preferences.

I notice that a lot of these commenters have no fucking clue about real life. You brought the characters to life, along with their struggles.

This is the second time I have read this one, and I liked it even better this time.

Not good. "Works for me"? Who is the author trying to kid? She's constantly being reminded of her mistake every time he gets her to play his game that brought about this disaster in the first place. How is she to move on from something that his fantasies put into motion?

Eventually she will come to realise that her hub is using her mistake as a crutch to get his own satisfaction and the resentment will begin to rot them out from within.

He doesn't want to be regarded as a wimp? Pity it wasn't him that dealt with Bradley then instead of the 3 women!

Just how old are these authors?

Seems like to me that all of us men are considered old at 60 & can’t get it up anymore.

Now I’ll admit to using Viagra or Cialis, and I need Testosterone since the prostatectomy and radiation, but the latter is covered by insurance and the first two are now generic costing less than $0.45 per tablet and I’ve never been bashful in admitting to using them.

And my libido is sadly much greater than my wife’s.

At close to 80 I’m still god for 2-3 times a day.

Bill

Play stupid games; win stupid prizes... and of course fool's bandaged finger goes wobbling back to the fire.

Story is confusing to my little mind, she gives him what makes his little pecker twitch and he can't face it? I don't know why she bothers to play the game again. Let the asshole spend the rest of his life jerking off to "dirty pictures" in a dark room.

Fuck him by not fucking him! ......

Almost nearing the end and your decided you must destroy what you had accomplished. you chose to take the name of The LORD in vain forno reason other than to shove your IMMATURITY in the face of the reader. Well you actions ensured that I would choose to rate your conglomeration of letters a "1". One day, Judgement Day, will find you standing before JESUS, answering for your IMMATURE stupidity. Guees what. you are going to come out on the short end of that discusion and learn that you will be spending eternity in the fires of HELL. Claim not tobelieve in GOD? you will learn that GOD'S reality will lay bare you twisted opinion.

1 star - not a good idea.

Life and relationships/marriage are not black or white (BTB or cuck/whore). The world between the two contains many shades of gray.

Too long.Boring

Contrary to my usual feelings, I don't mind the back story here, and not just because it's short, but because it speaks to the issues at hand.

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There's no reason to think that she wouldn't have cheated without the cuckold fantasies.

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"You forgot about fantasy and reality" - I don't think she thought what she was doing with Bradley was acting on his fantasy, she was simply drunk.

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"for the rest of my life the only guy who will touch you is me." - A little typo? "the only guy who will tough ME is YOU?"

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I just couldn't get into him getting off by fantasizing about being cuckolded.

Didn’t like it. It was interesting but fantasy too close to the reality she created.

I can’t see this at all believable.

Bill S.

Fucked up; no woman I have ever known (and there have been a few) would have any respect for a man that played out this fantasy. None. 1*

0 star - worst story ever - even though I only read the first page and went straight to the comments.

this is just cuck/wimp crap

Well you drove that right over a cliff. Any chance the follow up is the divorce from the worthless cunt?

I, like others, sometimes thought you were a good writer but you're just another closeted little boy.

ZEROZEROZERO.... No I quit after the first page; some things do not deserve to pollute my mind with.

CUCKCUCKCUCK.

Quite good...a story about reality, being human, love, forgiveness, mistakes, recovery.

Another cuck story, no surprise there. The "men" in Ohio's stories are usually wimps who hate offending anyone, especially a cheating wife. They weep, throw up, wring their hands; true pansies.

Just terrible writing. Take some writing courses. It reads like my 3 year old talks. Put the pen away my friend your best days are behind you

Second time around, downgraded my score to 1/5, this is really bad Cuck shit. Just plain drivel.

I thought you were good, mistake on my part. won't read anymore of your crap. minus 10 stars.

One of the worst stories I've seen on this site. Not worth rating.

Load of crap.

Fantasy can be deadly to a relationship, My wife knew that i loved her enough to let her have another lover just one time. I came home and caught them, quietly took a few pictures and about 30 seconds of video and walked down stairs and called the police and told them what was going on and i wanted them escorted our of MY house for their safety. I led them to the bedroom and introduced everyone and walked downstairs while the cheaters dressed. the police brought them downstairs, my wife had a bag packed. Her foolish lover turned to me and said "it didnt mean anything, it was just sex". I shoved him through the dining room window right in front of the police. Fifteen days later i got out of jail started the divorce. Not a good ending for a fantasy, but it wasnt mine.

bad idea

Probably a great literary achievement. Certainly one of your worst stories, ever. What a waste of wit and imagination. Might as well have Samuel Clemens write a Bat Man story.

Thanks for the effort.

Teddy? This is the very rare Ohio story that I just did not care for at all. A cuck, whorewife fantasy is just sick, I don’t care who it is.

This was definitely a strange story, I didn't get the ending though; was this what their healthy relationship looked like? It seems that the fantasy did allow the cheating to continue and while they acknowledged that it was wrong later, it just seems like an odd place to end it.

God, I wish there was someway to delete @Dlh143. I've come across their so called comments to many stories and it's always the same crap said each time. They never comment on the actual story just a lot of abuse. They are a truly sick minded individual.

As far as the story goes it isn't one of @Ohio's best and it looks like he's not publishing much lately not since early 2020. Really just a story about a guy whose fantasy becomes real and he has problems dealing with it.

Stupidest story on Literotica! I wish there was a way to delete this shitty story instead of rating it.

Here's the issue. Literotica only has "One" row for 'casting votes' about a story. So if it involves a subject that most people detest then it gets "Bad" reviews. However if Lierotica had to 'rows' to cast votes for a story. A 'Positive' row and a 'Negative' row and the read could only choose one. This could in fact open up a better dialog about stories. A +1 to +5 row and a -1 to -% row.

I di not like this story even though it was well wrote and very few if any typos. It was the ending that got to me. They never did work out their marriage and by doing what they are doing will eventually cause it to fail.

They both need to be shot and tossed into an outhouse somewhere.

Cuck and slut.

Those two are messed up. Maybe they deserve each other, or maybe they'd be better off apart. Either way, I can't relate to them.

Read this again, and changed my earlier vote from 3/5 to 2/5.

On a second reading, I came to a different conclusion, he really is a wimp and a cuckold and she really is a slut. They are both sick and a bit twisted and deserve each other’s misery, which is still coming I might add.

He will always doubt his manhood and respect for himself, and she will also doubt him and her respect will wither and die.

They are now trapped in a vicious cuck tragedy and there is only one way out.

If you need to throw up or have insomnia

If you suffer from insomnia

The wrong spouse was in therapy... That is all...

-jaye-

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Reading Literotica one would br forgiven for thinking that the practice of cuckoldry in the World was a huge part of world sexuality. Authors here love it as a subject to write about it as if it is mainstream conduct with couples young and old.

The truth?

Cuckolding is NOT a major sexual practice in either Western or Eastern cultures, it is

Poked down upon and actively disliked.

But for some strange reason authors here see it as subject that should occupy the minds of the readers of this site. What a load of bullshit.

Wake up you guys. Please.

Absolutely! I had the same thought.

I never realized how cuck-driven Ohio's stories were until I started reading them a second time.

chuck idiot story

This Chuck story took the cake!!! Not in a good way either... Husband deserved to be cheated on. What a dipshit.

OHIO, I, DIDN'T EVER THINK YOU WOULD WRITE SUCH TRASH. WOW, SICK SICK, WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR STATEMENT THAT YOU WOULD NEVER PORTRAY, A HUSBAND/MAN AS A WIMP? THAT IS WHY I LOOK FOR STORIES WRITTEN BY YOU.

I just finished reading a story just like this from another author. Everything much happened in the first page then the rest of the story was about the hubby not being able to come to terms with his wife´s affair. On the other one, the wife did it once and ended it, She said she didn´t think they could top what they did that one day. This one went back for more. But they both had earth shattering sex with their lover. I gave it a four star because I think it was a pretty good story. Boring at times, but good. Oh! one thing in common. In both stories the husbands were starting to lag in the bedroom which is hard for me to swallow since I never had a problem in my fifties or sixties. Not until my wife died.

... You just might get it, and that never ends well!

A cheating story is, essentially, romantic horror-a deconstruction of the concepts of One True Love and Happy Ever After. My favorites are the ones like this, that work like one of those home renovation shows: The relationship that was gets destroyed, but that makes room for a new relationship, one not rooted in preconceived notions of the person who you married and the disrespectful belief that you'll always be together no matter what... Nothing is more dangerous than believing you can't fuck up, that's when you ruin everything!

“If you can’t think of something nice to say, don’t say anything at all.” Because you don’t like the subject matter don’t blame the writer. Don’t read it if it offends you, but don’t knock other’s kink. Your kink might offend others. I happened to think this was a great story about a married couple finding that place where they trust each other not to betray each other and their fantasies. A 5 Star Rating and a Favorite.

Fantasy or not

Makes me feel like stomping shit out of wimp

Maybe it is popular fantasy but not for me or friends

Unless they have kept it hidden and?

Don't know what

I could possibly forgive cheating wife if one hell of an excuse But go off deep end before willing cuck

This honestly is well placed in Loving Wives. Well written 5*s

As usual, well written. Everyone knows, or should know, that once a fantasy becomes a reality it is almost certainly a huge disappointment as reality rarely lives up to your imagination.

I gave 4 stars for a well written, but not a favourite, story.

Just my opinion. 5*

Couldn't read to The end, Playing through a cuck Fantasy, she cheats And hubby Feels just sry for himself I guess to The end. Damn who likes such whiny wimp shit??

Just go ahead and get it over. Cattle-brand "WIMP" on your forehead and a little crop of tears below your droopy eyes and put everything up front. Then there's no trips to the psych dr or therapist and no pretending! And the enabler wives can put their cards on the table as well. Then these rejects will be bred out of existence where they belong: Oblivion.

The question people should ask is Why is this cuck plague so popular now? Why now? It's the exact question to ask every time a public media execution is taking place. Why now? Who pissed off who? Who leaned on the DA and why? Etc...

Ohio has much to teach and is capable of finely honed observations of humanity. Kudos go out to him.

But this reader has fallen afoul of these hand wringer husbands and their teary-eyed bullshit. They can sob and maunder all they want but in the days of yore - arguably quite a bit more productive than our own - they would have had their face smashed a couple of times and that would be the end of it. Lesson learned.

Masculinity is a precious, fragile thing. Guard it. And don't drink the water. Throw away your f'ing tv, too.

While I can't say that I understand this fetish, it was an interesting story. Also very well written!

I did, however, find this little gem of an error that I couldn't resist laughing at:

"I made a mistake I'll never, ever make again. I had sex with someone else. For the rest of my life I'll feel sorry, and for the rest of my life the only guy who will touch you is me."

What? Is she having a sex-change now, too??

When he felt that he was only "half a man" he was wrong. He was no man at all, married to a cheating slut wife.

This piece of shit story is the end. She fucks around, he feels bad about it and everyone works to get them back together. This shit is just too fucked up to even comment on. I can't take anymore. I'm moving on to another writer. Another 1 star big steaming pile. I sure hope you're still not writing these turds.

I realize that I have never contributed not one single story to LW. I have pitched story content or outlines to a real writer. And I have edited a few stories for grammatical mistakes. But people who attack writers come off sounding like spoiled kindergarten students. If I have ever been overzealous in picking apart a story, I offer up my sincerest apologies. Then I think I am no better than the cheaters in these stories who beg for second chances. Too little...too late.

A nice big dinner consisting of a .45. He is a disaster waiting to happen.

On a much more fun side note:

One of my clients years ago walked in on his wife and her married boyfriend doing the nasty after I had given him the details of his wife's disgusting activities per pictures, video, and voice recordings. He was getting ready to have her served and I think he set her up to catch her. He ended up throwing both of them out the bedroom window, which was closed at the time and a second story window to boot. While I don't recommend people do that, it seemed to fix all of his problems, mentally at least.

He had some questions he needed to answer with the police but ironically, neither his wife nor her lover pressed charges. In fact, his wife said her lover jumped out the closed window and she followed suit to escape but "Fell".

No action, just blabbing and "deep thoughts."

Good writer talks through characters instead of writing lengthy passages of explanations.

First you dedicate this to that giant Cuck Goodhusband. Who is actually a woman. Then you have some dumbass renting a bulldozer to dig a pool. Bulldozers are great at pushing dirt but they sure as hell don't dig holes for pools. They could cut him a nice slot in the ground. Then you have him marry someone way too young for him. He KNOWS the pitfalls and then he gets the pitfalls. And you want us to believe some sex changes the fact that she's a cheating slut? Awful story.

must one hear if ever the truth shall prevail. She is just a cheater, TK U MLJ LV NV

I don’t know any men that talk or sound like the husband in this story

I'll be honest, I gave it a four on first read, upon reflection I still think it was a four star. That having been said, fantasies are just that, random thought stimuli that have no place in real life. A wimp wouldn't have reacted as he did when confronted with the evidence of her betrayal, for that is what it was. Even though he was angry he stayed in the home, for what reason we can only guess at. It may have simply been a it's cheaper to keep her more than anything else.

That having been said, her response to him when he was surprised was her own damned fault. They weren't back to normal just yet, and surprises don't always work out well. Now when she saw the direction his mind went then yes, she should have realized what had happened. If she didn't like it, well then she could just leave. She is allowed to have feelings and even to be hurt, but instead of giving him the response that she did, she should have simply communicated with him in lieu of her knee jerk reaction! Had it been me, personally, I believe I would have called it a day, left her a letter explaining what she wouldn't allow him to say and then packed a bag and walked out of her life. Couples argue all the time, however, couples argue five to thirty times as much after a betrayal. I would have expected him to call it a day at that point.

As to those who flame the author, well to you guys I have a few pieces of advice;

A) the stories on this site are free an you are not obligated to read them!

B) The fact that so many react so violently and so strongly with your opinions shows that the writer has done a good job. You can hate what he said, but, you have read his/her work and experienced a strong reaction to it, thus he has done his job!

C) You may disagree with the writer and or the comments left here but so may others equally disagree with you and your comments, that doesn't make anyone wrong, it just means that you have different point of views.

D) As a wise old woman once told me, opinions are like assholes, everyone has one and they are usually full of fecal matter!

Good day!