All Comments on 'Shay and Sheena'

I have been getting a lot of feedback on this story some good and some bad. For everyone who like the story, Thank you. For all of you writting me and telling me that this story sucked, while I can accept your critisisms, If you don't tell me why you thought It wasn't good I cannot learn from this and become a better writer. So instead of writing things like "Dont quit your day job" and "Dude this story sucked." Take that extra minute and tell me honestly why.

That is all.

Juvenile, very silly, and poorly written story. Author's other try wasn't any better.