by BE1953
He' got a monster of a cock and they don't fuck.
Using technology she ballons into a stripper so she can fuck her husband. Strange
What a complete and total fuckwad you are. Just read the damn porn, jack off your little peepee and move on you douche. Spending time writing negative comment after negative comment is not hurting anyone but yourself. The stories are still here for everyone else to enjoy. Meanwhile you just get even more miserable.
I liked this one much better than the others of yours - the transformation and becoming-slutty was very good, and not distracted by the BBC stuff which does nothing for me. The bit with the twins while watching his wife dance does have some problems with pacing, however - the focus of the narration switches so totally to watching the dancers that we have no idea what's going on with the narrator and the twins until the very end. But, to repeat, I liked this one a lot - more, please!
Very erotic; I think the focus was lost for a bit when the husband was being entertained by the twins. It appears that Alexis now wants to fuck any and all, but that was not clear.