All Comments on 'She Made Him Do It Ch. 04'

The story kind of brushes past how implausible the financial plot is, but not offensively so. I was able to enjoy the story without being insulted by blatantly stupid scenarios. Likewise, the erotic parts are reasonably believable in a fantasy kind of reality. Rob isn't such a stud that he shoots gallons of cum five times in a row. Nat is a bit less believable but fun to imagine.

So I'm looking forward to the rest of the story - hoping Nat isn't merely playing Rob. Hoping they succeed and fuck their way off to a happy pretend ending. Hoping you don't take the story into a painful, stupid or overly perverse end.