All Comments on 'She Taught Me How To Love'

I really liked this story but the thing that kept me from loving it was that it was too repetitive. There is a lot of restating and over explaining that isn't necessary. And at one point the roommate's name changed from Maddie to Maggie. I don't mean to be nit picky, it is just a pet peeve of mine

My girl was thicker, wild and free and loved to have sex often. As I mentioned, I was shy and inexperienced, so she was everything I was not.

So, how come you are inexperienced, never had sex with her ????

People think this is romance are the 50% who divorce in the USA...