All Comments on 'She Teases, He Goes Too Far'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantastic

Liked the lead up. It ends too abruptly. It would be cool as a series. Moly brings a friend home etc.

JoeBlakeDarkJoeBlakeDarkover 13 years ago
Goood effort =)

I agree with the above comment, it was well placed paced and the intro was arousing but the ending just happened too quickly, but still I really enjoyed reading your story.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
liked it

please write a second one to this story..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I need more!

Please pleeeeease write more to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too fast

The story went to fast and by the time I was a bit wet, it stopped

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