All Comments on 'She used to be Innocent Ch. 03'

I love your story and happy he was mostly nice to her but sad that she gave in so easy I would love for them to have a happy ending but it would of been nice if she would of put a bit more fight before she acted like this chapter please don't take what I say the wrong way and hope what i say makes sense and not saying he has to but he still hasnt even apologized he did rape her ect please update soon

I saw these were your first stories on the site. I find them very entertaining. I hope there are more chapters to come but please keep William harsh and dominant towards her, this is non-consent after all; as well as a lovely ending. Good job!

I love the developed bond between the two characters. The feelings were tense and hot. Keep it up!

Love it just the way it is its perfect

Totally unrealistic how quickly she just gave into him.

not sure why yall want it to be more about rape. its an excellent story and asking the writer to change the storyline or the attitude between the characters will completely change how well they write. your only excuse is that you want it to follow your fantasies so you can masturbate. great story but not what YOU would call wanking material. this looks like the start to a terrific novel. anyone who says otherwise is angry that it doesnt perfectly follow their fetish.

Pleas please please write more, I love that he switches between sweet and dominating. I'd like to see them ending up a couple with him dominating when it come's to sex and stuff like that but being a kind loving man the rest of the time. Mostly that's what I'd love to see in my life too lol

This was so good. Hope to hear more from you.

"A tear escaped her eyes. She was nothing more than a dog to him."

so whats she expecting from him of course she is less of a dog to him she is fucking free whore to him

she isnt even worried about her future or the shame she will definitely face in future at the hands of society which puts the blame on victim for rape

so whats her fate

she is happy to be his fucktoy a slave with no dignity

once done with her he will throw her away

by the time she would be pregnant when he will disappear

so will her lord steele kick her out for bringing shame and awilliams bastard

surely william woulnt marry her no matter how bad he feels after using her and giving her one or two badtards of his she is of a low status to william who possibly must have a wife or fiance waiting on her

her life ruined when he took her virtue