All Comments on 'She Wolf Ch. 02'

I want more of this story.

Hi i have to say this kind of story i dont read , but having said that i love all your other stories , so gave this one a try . let me say the writing as well as the story was really good . but then why would i be surprised. as your writing has that little some thing . with all the twist and turns . only add to you making each story . one that is so compelling * to read on to the end .

knowing you have written so many stories. what i do love is the different kinds of stories you have written with so many twist and turns .I love that.

Cant wait to read more

I'm enjoying the story so far, and I'm hoping that this is a multi segment story. So far you've glossed over more than I think you should have. I'm interested in the character Nicholette, she's got a story of her own that seems interesting. Kudos so far. Thanks for sharing.

for Benson!! I really hate it when the strong prey on the weak!!! i also hate unreasonable alphas!!! I agree that we need to read more about Nicolette!!!

I thought this story would have more depth. Hmm it's good story regradless, but you could went into more details about certain situations.Anyways I hope to read more from you.

I like the flow of this and wonder where you'll take it. I think you've tapped into some

thing that we all take for granted, the readers feelings. Vamps really aren't my thing, but something intriguing about the way you present them. You DO have a gift for bringing us into it and I think those that don't find the plot compelling, I feel sad that you won't follow a story that has plot with sex instead of the other way around. Keep going girl, you have a story on your hands now.

I think you have a good story. But I feel like you are rushing to explain the past and are skipping a crossed the top for the present parts of the story. I guess it seems more like an outline or brief review. I would suggest taking a little more time its go to flash back to the past so we understand what is going on but also take time to develop the current story without rushing it. Expand each idea out, I want to know more about each of her kids and her relationship with Nicky. Keep going I know you can make this a great story.

DO CONTINUE

Noooo! I wanted to read something new. Good story, do what you must.

-R

Enjoying it very much. Love the vamp bff. The story has been moving quickly. It feels like a very delailed set up. I hope it slows down some as you unfold each individual's story. This new mate better be a stand up guy. Nina has had more than her share of craptastic males.

I thought her husband had beat her and to find out her injuries where from her trying to protect him, never saw that one coming. I like how she saved the vamp only to in turn be saved by the vamp. And now that here children have grown she can finally grieve only to scent her new mate......this is good.....

Did you mean vampiress? Or are you consciously creating a new word?

Just asking.

LOL

Enjoying your story very much. Please continue.

I loved it! Depressing as hell though I kept waiting for them to get a break.

good job I am hooked

You need to learn story telling... Youre not so much telling a story as you're describing what happened... There's a big difference... And this bounces all over the place...

-jaye-