All Comments on 'She Wolf Ch. 02'

Better!! This is a awesome plot. Keep up the good work.

Very interesting. Better with grammer and spelling. Keep them coming.

Ok, your grammer has improved...so thats a very good thing :)

Your story so far, is going very good. Im very interested in it. I do hope next time you can try and write more. The chapters are a bit too short.

Very well done. Kudos for the improvement too!!

Good start, but is too short

I'm so impressed with the improvement in your writing...well done! I'm really liking the plot as well, keep writing! :)

this chapter is much better too...well done..keep up the good work!DC

your chapters seem to short to me, then again im used to reading novels and such. so far this appears to be a good series, we'll see if it stays that way (usually it does if not gets better)

Can't wait to see what happens!

Just one little tip: (I haven't read the nxt chpt so I don't know if it's needed) but usually werewolve's follow an alpha not a leader