by Kar626
This is shaping up to be a great story..im glad you got an editor...it makes a real difference now..well done and thanks for the chapter...cant wait to read more!!
There better be a fight with that other girl! :D I want to see fist flying hahahaha.
Just make sure Nakita never looses her fiery personality! Thats the one thing i like most about this character.
Keep up with the good work. Please write the next chapter asap.
How dare you end it so soon!?!? More more MORE!!!!! Great chapter by the way just too short.
You're doing great, and it's a wonderful story. Can't wait for chapter 5.x
This is my kind of story. I love mate/were stories; especially when 1 of them doesn’t just FALL in love and then those usually go into their everyday life. Thanks!