All Comments on 'Shelley's Itch'

You reversed the last line of your story. Your grammar needs improvement. As for the wimp/cuckold theme, I won't even go there. Most female authors leave the bio blank (i.e., "no answer") for most or all of the entries; since your bio has "no answer" for virtually all entries, does that mean you are female? Is it your fantasy to have five children fathered by someone other than a cuckolded, wimpy husband? I know, it's just a story (and not a very original one at that).

It was horrible!

all there is cockold stories or wimp fucking hubby stories.is it all gay site now.

Well this story has to be some kind of fantasy, because not even the worst pathetic wimp would act like that. He may not be man enough to physically over power the lover and his wife, but there are other means to get your dignity back.

If you have no ego, no pride no self respect this how you will end up. Fucked over by a so-called wife. Who apparently still loves her meal ticket. I can only say WHAT THE FUCK is wrong with this person.

a man would not be humiliated like that...me coming from my baxkground would have entered his house after shooting his sorry ass for the comment he made when he came to the door...as for my wife id haveto tell her just to stay with her boyfriend ...she might have trouble getting a dead man hard but since he is what she wanted just stay there....if she wanted me back clean up his house and get rid of the evidence of her being there and crawl back t ome on her hands and knees....now if the cops figured out i killed her fuck toy id kill her next so she better do a good job of cleaning up evidence ...maybe makeit look like a drug deal gone bad or that some pissed off wife kiled him because he couldnt do the job...and in his present condition she would be right...well unless she stuffed him

It is much better that such men submit themselves to their wives. Otherwise they might run for public office and try to pretend they are men by starting wars!

I am married to a gal that loves bigger cocks also. Mine little 3 or 4" cock does not do it. I love eating her, but cannot do much in way of cock to pussy. Since she started teasing me about how small I am I cannot even get hard enough to enter a woman. Now all I get is jacking my little cock while she has her choice of men she wants.

It is all good. Love my cuckold life now.

Keep writing great stories.

I m loss of words after reading this story.I thought it's a joke more & a story less.Please use your talent nicely.Dont write such absurd story.I know this is just a story but it looks more like a fantasy.There r so many mens with small cocks but their wives dont go out for "scratching" their itch.You nonsense can create bad thoughts in the mind of the peoples.For ur knowledge size does not matters because only the one third of the vagina needs stimulation & is sensitive.A 4" cock can also satisfy a pussy.Great real & dont live in fantasy.

Plot: thinner than my hairline.

Characters: non-existent. Nothing to make one like or loathe anyone in this story.

Motivation: Sickness. I don't care who you are, your sexual orientation or personal beliefs; you don't beat or humiliate someone you love unless you are sociopathic or just plain evil.

Grammar and English usage at the 2nd grade level. Have you ever heard of quotation marks, for instance?

Pitiful, just pitiful.

Another cuckold story, that all there is any more on Lit. when will we get a story worth the time to read?

if you are, then you need to get some help. This story, and the author is just a joke.

How could anyone live this life? What is there to live for? The woman doesnt love you, lust for you, want you, or even think about you. And you pathetic little man arent man enough to know who you are.

It isn't the size of your cock, it's how you use it. Any woman worth marrying would tell you the same. I assume you wrote this because you are a wimp or you want to be one.

You are truely a wimp. I bet your wife doesn't fuck you much with that pathetic cock of yours. I would take her from you and leave you alone.

She thinks only of herself and her cunt--out the door you go lady

She thinks only of herself and her cunt--out the door you go lady

Are there any stories on this site anymore that are not about cuckolds jacking off while their wives are being fucked by one or more strangers. Pretty depressing.

the Ct. Yankee

That's a "loving wife" story alright! Nothing BUT love in this one. I must have missed the meeting where love actually means degradation and subjugation, or some dude who is well on his way to being gay himself and just needs a total whore of a wife for that extra added push. Written poorly, though the story line would kill it even if Stephen King wrote it; hope the author doesn't quit his/hers/its' day job!

Thash nothing but trash!!!

The writing level matches a 6th grader and the plot line is so boring. The premise of the story is completely unrealistic and sick. Better luck next time but stay with the fag stories - you are much better at that genre.

when I realized that I was completely wasting my time with this utterly unrealistic, non-erotic piece of crap.

No would have been easy and far less costly and humiliating. Someone else could be the meal ticket

seeing as he's not interested in #2, send him to the next world

wrong catagory. This should be in fetish.

What a stupid question after getting caught cheating. Yes, I do bitch. Don't come home. I'll pack your clothes and send them over to Eric's. I will never understand a "loving wife" such as this. What's even more perplexing, is the wimp male in stories like this. Geez, it's so simple, just dump the bitch and find someone else. There are many choices out there, just keep looking.

to peabrain

No man would put up with that. Unless she outweighs you and is MUCH stronger than you, either throw her out or pack and leave. If your worried get a restraining order. Buy a gun. Why changes schools. And the 5 kids by other men? There's so much implausible/unbelievable crap in this so-called story it's laughable. Don't waste your time reading it.

Imagine that TART 15 yrs later and 5 children. Shelley still has that FAT; SAGGING, PUTRID CUNT to scratch !!!

Have a can of my vomit. Cheers!

So he should have chosen divorce...She didn't talk with him about her problem...He didn't divorce and so had what he asked for....

a skanky cuck. TK U MLJ LV NV

what a sad and pathetic loser you are.

...to dream of writing about others fucking the wife while paying to feed and clothe the slut and her bastards? Ever reach any goal in life or always relying on others to do the work?

Stories about bulls always make me remember the story about a bull that lived in a field next to a cow, both separated by a barbed wire fence...He every day jumped the fence and went to fuck the cow...And he always said in a strong voice: "Big Bull Eric is here!!!"...One day he missed the jump and lost his most precious welfare in the barbed wire...The cow said "Big Bull Eric is here!!!, let's fuck..." And he in a weak and reedy voice: "Just little Eric from now on..."...soon or later this is what happens to all bulls, or age make them weak and lonely or they find a fence (husband) that took care of them...1*

like the idea of a big cock bull fucking a woman who needs it

Humiliation. Shelley is a sociopath and hubby is no man.

Take this trash to the garbage can, or better yet burn it asap.

That one word describes him...

How much garbage can this site take before the admin does better editing and rejecting crap like this????? Pussy wimps have no business bringing this cuck fag garbage to real men....

She demeans, degrades and humiliates him. She shows him by her actions that she has no love or respect for him. All she sees is a meal ticket. Why stay? Why raise other men's children? Why expose himself to every disease known to man? Even for a fictional story, this made no sense whatsoever. Lousy story telling.

Deserves a minus 10

Too many sisters? No backbone? Never went to school to learn how to spell? This is just really bad cuck shit! Gave it a 1 and that is too much.

God made man. Samuel Colt made men equal. And every man should remember that. So. You’re a 5’6” guy who weighs a buck forty and your wife’s lover is a beast, 6’3” and 245? Equalize yourself brother, and don’t back down. Or don’t. Be a doormat. Nobody really cares but you.

just like everyone else, TK U MLJ LV NV

By far worst story that I have read tonight, and I have read 40.

My wife’s name is Shelley and her and I read this together and soaked the mattress. Great story.