All Comments on 'Sheriff Tulley'

This was a great story, but it seemed too short. It seemed romantic enough, but I was left with questions about what had happened in their lives before they met. Why were they so vulnerable? Did they have families elsewhere? What happened to them afterward? I think you'd have had better ratings on this story had you fleshed it out a little more. Tell us more about the characters, their foibles, and strengths. Describe the little town and the sheriff's house in more detail, so we can see them in our mind's eye. This story had a lot of potential, and I'd like to see you resubmit it.