All Comments on 'Sherri Smyth's New Slave'

It is a good story a short one but good I must say I am not a fan of the whole telling a story like its from the readers point of view but thats just my opinion still liked it cant wait till ch2 4/5

Your POV story just doesn't read well. More like a 12 year old talking about imagined sexual acts. Dumber than a stump.

I found it a confusing theme

Way too short of a story.

This story made absolutely no sense.