by MikenAS
Nice scene. Worked for me! You would benefit from a proof reader to catch small errors.
Made little sense to me. A wife is being raped, but as she awakens tied up, helpless, with no power in the situation, and she happily jumps in? Did they plan this days ago or what?
The references to the various body parts as well as the writer thinking that all a woman wants in this world is to be their cum receptical is amusing and clearly an unsophisticated male view.
This was really comfortable, nice and sexy. I like that it was consensual all the way through. It's just the kind of thing long term couples get up to.... some other comments mention that it seems like rape but i disagree... in my experience it doesn't sound like it.
I've woken up to my boyfriend playing with me, biting me and having his way with me. And I love waking up to that. I love being his little play thing.
This story is perfect and is slightly personal.....
Keep it up. Very nice. ❤