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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwww

love it is so nice to see part a girl werewolf from the typicalalpha male

madengineer3madengineer3about 15 years ago
A Good Story!

I like the plot in this story. This is a very good read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
confused

your story was good, however your "shewolf" sounds more like an vampire than a wolf.

ShadowedDreamsShadowedDreamsalmost 14 years ago
Sorry,

I wanted to read, general plot sounded interesting, male lead sounded interesting, but I have a few hang-ups, smoking is one of them, drugs are another.

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good luck in the future but I probably won't be back.

SchriftstellarSchriftstellarabout 12 years ago

wow, this is great. Seriously, the way you describe the surroundings of rain is really well done. nice job, i'll be reading more.

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_eover 8 years ago
I liked the plot, I really do

I skipped to read some of the next chapter before I wrote this.

I like the idea of what's happening: supernatural female going after human male. I wish more stories used this plot rather than usually a supernatural male. But everything moves a little too quick in the story in my opinion. Not that I want to read a story that drags on, but you make it so quick, that I can't get into it, and it starts feeling really fake and childish. If that makes sense. It felt like you used the drugs and partying as a crutch for them meeting and interacting. Just my own opinion.

Thanks for posting.

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