All Comments on 'Shireen's Story'

keep it up mate

man u rule big time.plz never stop writing.looking forward to ur next submission.dont keep us hanging.

peace

U rock man..coming from my native land,thats the most awesome story i've read..i savoured evry adventure the two had.. Fuking awesome

Wow, this girl seems like she runs on rocket fuel, whoosh!!

wat can i say

u nailed it again..............

cant wait to hear the next one.....

do write soon.

ahmed from lahore..........

this is how an erotic story should b written........

doesnt get any better than this......period

i absolutely agree wid everyone else out here.

i was hard the whole time.such a fun ride.

cheeta hai yar .

chuk ke rakh.

wah jee wah

zabardast yar.

I just cant imagine a pakistani couple had done all this. Whats so ever i think its the best i ever visited from a pakistani writer. keep it up man

Really awesome erotic writing. Well done and write more of Shireen's adventures.

I just loved it like all others. The thought of Shireen's pathan descent and her gradual sexual awakening turns me on. I have had 4 pathan girls up till now and they all were initially conservative and shy but when u slowly but steadily bring them to heavenly pleasures they eventually beat ur imagination. and when they r convinced to do something, they r strong/ brave to stare back into the eyes of reality.

Awesome work. Plz contact me at luv2mus@gmail.com if u like to get in touch. May be u'll get a different idea for writing a story.

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