All Comments on 'Shoe Store ShowOff'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Interesting

Certainly not poor enough to warrant be called "rubbish". This category is not my favorite, but within this category, this is a cute story.

seadaddyseadaddyabout 19 years ago
Worked for me

Well, I for one loved it! My G/F is an exhibitionist and this sort of thing makes me horny as hell. Got any more like it??

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 19 years ago
Pretty Good...

Maybe Al Bundy wasn't such an idiot for working in a shoe store...

Overall I thought it was a good story.

MagicFingersMagicFingersabout 19 years ago
Hot story

Wish it had happened to me.

Maybe when she comes back to buy the high heels she can do more with him?

MagicFingersMagicFingersabout 19 years ago
Hot story

Wish it had happened to me.

Maybe when she comes back to buy the high heels she can do more with him?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Well written, realistic - I liked it

I thought the story was well-written and quite believeable - you could believe that it might happen to you!

quietdragonquietdragonabout 19 years ago
nice, but inconsistent

nice eroticism....but slight inconsistency. A glimpse of panties...and then none? when did she remove? but overall vnice...

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