All Comments on 'Sholan Alliance - AU Bk. 02 Ch. 03'

very nice !

MORE !!!! please ?

I loved this chapter. It's getting more complexed with this shadow group.

Great addition looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing this story.

Eg. You use "to" when you should be using "too". "Cloths" when you should be using "Clothes". It makes for a very frustrating read and it makes a great story falter in the parts where the wrong grammar or tense of a word is used...

These Authors write for free. If you want perfect grammer in a story go buy a book! This story and this Author are fantastic! I am enjoying all of his story lines and cant wait for the next chapter! Thank You maxd01!

You want to correct grammar, get a job as an editor...or better yet: go to college, get a teaching certificate, and TRY to teach 6th or 7th graders proper grammar. Good luck with that!

Wheres the next chapter, I've been enjoying this, cant leave it with an ending like that