All Comments on 'Shooting with Helena'

So steamy and sensual! My head was spinning. Can't wait to see what you've got cooked up for the next chapter!

I especially loved when Cassie shivered from the anticipation and Helena comforted her.

top story cant wait for the next chapter

I am almost speechless... I honestly think this is one or if not the best stories I have had the pleasure in reading!

Loved all of it, am now about to read your other one, knowing it will measure up :) Please continue!

Phenomenal story, well-written, kinky, erotic, romantic - all rolled up into one. You've tapped into a few of my own personal fantasies [ as you might tell from my own LIT stories ]. Welcome to the site, please, write more!

This story is not only hot, but it's very intriging. I love how Cassie comes around to Helena's advances and ideas. The transformation was both sexual and believable. It makes me wish I had a sexy sister I could fuck whenever I wanted to ;)

hot and sexy,

yet beautiful

Don't leave us hanging! When's the next installment coming?

Oh. My. God. I came so hard I think I ruined my keyboard! Totally worth it! This is literature from a Goddess, not a mere mortal. Wow!

Wow, I really loved this story. Gotta keep it coming. I love the love between the sisters, and the fact that their relationship is more than sex. It's the emotions here that make it so good and hot.

My lover was in the next room while I was reading this...she heard me moaning and came in and saw me masturbating...she got on the bed and sucked me... while I finished reading the story, and let me cum all over her gorgeous face. Then, we made love for almost 2 hours. I feel totally spent...this story makes a very storng impact!

Fantastic story! I love this one. well done.

One of the more realistic (and so sexier) build ups to forbidden intimacy. Really hot start to a series, I'm looking forward to reading more.

LOVE THIS STORY IT IS JUST SO EROTICALLY AROUSING.