All Comments on 'Shopping with Daddy'

Please continue this thread. Looking forward to Daddy having more encounters with the "small humans" aspect. I'm not quite sure what that's about, should be interesting though. Thanks for sharing.

Daddy should know one does not go from the ass to the pussy without being clean as this can cause problems for the little. The contamination in the ass should not be passed into the pussy. Otherwise, an interesting story and I am also curious about the small human. Are they other littles he plays with or perhaps children, real children that he does not play sexually with, not pretend as with littles?

I assure you Daddy understands the ass to pussy issue and I assure you he makes sure that I am well taken care of, so it is correct to assume he made sure that there was no contamination during our scene. When I am in my bubble, I am not necessarily aware of things that may be done or said, so I rely on Daddy for details. I believe in writing this story, that putting that he wiped clean, etc. would have taken away from the story and how HOT it was. Before I submit a story, Daddy advises anything that may be missing or questions that I have...He approves everything I will submit. ;)

As far as "small humans" are concerned, this is family members or friends that are not involved in the lifestyle. It does not equate to Littles, Middles, etc. in the lifestyle...I will reference them accordingly when it is needed.

I've often heard writer say they didn't include something because it 'wasn't sexy' or 'broke the flow of the action.' Hard to discount that opinion from the author, but here I go. We the readers aren't actually watching the scene. We don't have the ability to read the author's mind. Bottom line is that most often, if it is not stated, shown, alluded to, mentioned after the fact-something-it didn't happen for the rest of us. We the readers are left taking the story at face value. You, the author, didn't want to break the sexy vibe with pesky details yet that is exactly what happens in cases like this. We, the readers, are suddenly yelling Red! at the top of our mind. How sexy is that to be reading along muttering nonono? It often takes very little to include safety type details. No long lectures are needed. Make it part of the action of what someone is required to do or chooses to do for/to the other. A few words is all it takes. And a daddy showing he cares for his little, especially when he's worked her into inability to care for herself - that's sexy.

To the Anonymous comment.....Thank you....I will clarify next time as this is my first time doing this. I truly appreciate any and all feedback so that I can learn.

I have now read all 3 of your stories and have enjoyed them all. Try and make them a little longer. Look forward to reading your next story. Regards, Jack.