All Comments on 'Shopping with Sara'

by DrThrob

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verybigoneverybigonealmost 14 years ago
Hope this is is the start to a multi part story

Can't wait to read what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fun Read

Believable? No. Fun? Yes! I enjoyed that.

stevaroonistevaroonialmost 14 years ago
Fun bit of fluff

A nice story. Good use of the English language, which is great. I don't get how this gets filed under the "Incest/Taboo" category except for a couple of sentences, but not a big problem. Thanks for sharing your work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
not good not bad

no incest and totally unrealistic but not bad. would have been better in the erotic couples area maybe.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago
Wrong category

Where's the incest?

And 11 people in a car with no seatbelts is just plain unsafe. For shame.

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