by DrThrob
Where's the incest?
And 11 people in a car with no seatbelts is just plain unsafe. For shame.
no incest and totally unrealistic but not bad. would have been better in the erotic couples area maybe.
A nice story. Good use of the English language, which is great. I don't get how this gets filed under the "Incest/Taboo" category except for a couple of sentences, but not a big problem. Thanks for sharing your work!
Can't wait to read what happens next