by some_boy
That was very good. The last line did it for me though. Gosh I almost wished you hadn't stopped. OMG you sooooo need to do another from HIS point of view. Did he realize from the get go what was going on? Or did he just awake to a tightness around his hard cock? So many questions! I LOVE IT!
It was hard for me to write it from her perspective. I mean, of couse I can't perfectly channel a woman's point of view and, rereading it, it sounds to me like a guy wrote it (duh) but it was fun to try.