All Comments on 'Shrinking Potential'

by shamechaser

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Interesting

A different twist. I like it. Hope you continue it. There are countless options going forward.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
fantastoc

amazing story!! so humiliating!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story

Very creative and humiliating, hope you continue.

spaceinvaderspaceinvaderalmost 6 years ago
Good

All good, but it seemed to me his penis shrunk too small too suddenly, so it didn't feel earned - everything happened all at once. I would have made the process more drawn out - maybe over several sessions so he has to process the decision of whether to break it off with her or keep going, so rather than being non-consensual, she traps him into allowing her to do it using his lust against him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

White male of privilege, patriarchy, what did an SJW write this?

shamechasershamechaserover 5 years agoAuthor
On the contrary

Interesting that you see it that way... the character was framed in this manner precisely for that reason... to answer your question, lmao no.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I want more!!!

Please I want to know more!!! Rhonda is a great character and I want to see her in more tricking guys into shrinking adventures!!!

OmnosOmnosover 5 years ago
I’m obsessed!!!

This story is hot$ Rhinda is Hot I really wan her to shrink more dicks!!! And if they’re virgin boys better!!!! Thanks for giving us this story!!!

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 5 years ago
Wow

I am pathetically small and I would love it if This cream were real, She could make mine disappear and I would be so Happy. I do hope it works on balls too. I hate mine. They are so ugly dangling almost a 1/3 of the way to my knees.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5 stars

Enjoyable, well written and pleasingly different story. Please, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Part 2?

Hi when is the part 2 being published? I really want more of Rhonda and her cream!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
When this will continue?

I really loved this story but i think part 2 is needed, I think the main character here is rhonda and of course her miracle cream!! I would actually like to read more about her and how she trick average to actually big guys into real sph!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great Story

This is a good read with a really nice twist! I wish I could read more of this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I’m wanking

I’m cumming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Come On Bro!

We need that part 2, I wanna see what happens next and also get my rocks off to what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Part 2?

Please make par 2!!! It’s long overdue

Mamut22Mamut22over 4 years ago
pls more

Agree please second chapter i love this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
When?

Part 2 is way overdue!!! Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Part 2 please!!!

We need another part! What happened to him next? Also Will Rhonda shrink more dicks??? Please continue!!! Or give the story to another author sobirncsn be continued!!!

Tank4228Tank4228over 2 years ago

Definitely need more of this !!!

rickylaw01rickylaw013 months ago

What a shame. You write a great story with a promise of a part 2 then let everyone down

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Part 2 please!

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