All Comments on 'Shudder Ch. 02'

Love this story

Exceptional storied

Well written story. Looking forward to chapter 3.

I love it. I do have a question though. Did Derek knock up his neighbors Mom? It would be cool if he did and everyone though it was her husbands. Plus I don't think Nevyn should move out of Nancy just yet...there is more he could do there IMO.

You have written very well , I love it. Expecting more updates from you

I really love this series. It was so hot and sexy. I love all the seduce and tease. Maybe Nevyn still in her body for a longer while keep grinning and taunting Derek like licking her lips, use her leg to rub him under table during dinner, out of sight of his sister and father!

Nevyn planting lust in Nancy then he leave for Derek's sister mean that when he slip undetected into his sister's body and he tell Aubrey about a hopper, he didn't know that the hopper is listening to him while he focus on his mom! Now his mom was changed to be more horny lustful mom and Derek mistake her for the hopper, this is great!

Please continue!

Enjoying the story