All Comments on 'Shy Auditor Shows Her Assets Ch. 01'
by orie
- 11 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoKeep up the good work, looking forward to the rest of the story.
roadieabout 13 years agoThis sounds like the beginning to a great story ... looking forward to additional chapters!
Anonymousabout 13 years agothis looks to be a good one....keep up the good work, can't wait to read much much more!!!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI like stories that have some plot and substance to them. I especially like it when I feel like I get to know the characters. I'll be looking for subsequent submissions.
LuckyBastard13about 13 years agoI love an author that starts out with background info on the characters. Can't wait to get to part 2.
Thanks for sharing!
Anonymousabout 13 years agowith all of that time in basketball lockerrooms it is difficult to sell the "extreme" shyness you are presenting.
KingCuddleover 11 years agoBut yes, if Ann has been an athlete that long, nudity shouldn't be an issue.
RecHikerover 10 years agoI know this story was published a while back but I just found it and I love the slow build up. Moving on to the next chapter.... BTW - 5 stars for this one.....
RecHiker
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