All Comments on 'Shy Indian Wife Ch. 01'

by ClosetSkeleton

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice. Continue please

Nice effort. Reflects how an indian marriage may progress. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice

Nice start to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome start

Great in detail story telling.. Hopefully keep it slow and steady and keep posting more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†+ [(4+) 4.4/5.0 = 88% = A]

I treat this Ch. as very good introduction.

The two well crafted characters are ready to face the challenges of a new environment.

He has brought his shy Indian wife to America.

White men will be hitting on her left, right & center.

It happened to my wife when we moved to Toronto, Canada.

It's actually a good sign if other men salivate when looking at your wife:

- it means you made a very good choice, &

- it will boost her self confidence in the new environment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
1*

illiterate cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
from the old one

ClosetSkeleton

Why do you not remain in the closet? Why give in to this compelling urge to write?

Why make a fool of yourself?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome

awesome,outstanding description and fantastic narration and build-up.

Please so not care about these wimps and brainless weirdos who will say bad things about your writing. Do not even get bothered about these cretins. They have been bad mouthing and throwing brickbats at every INDIAN AUTHOR.

Screw them by your excellent flair for writing.

Loved your description of your wife wearing loads of INDIAN JEWELLERY.

Just One request,please make her wear a sexy low saree showing her creamy tummy and deep navel,before she stops wearing saree for her exhibitionism later on in the tory.

Do consider my request and make her a true exhibitionist. Also please do continue your wonderfully talented work. Loved your work and rated it 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
dis was trash

dis was trash.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great start

Wow, Great start, keep it going the same way. Cant wait to see the next one and which type and sizes of undies did she pick.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This is the Intro to subsequent chapters. I gave it a 4.5

By now there are 4 chapters in this series. I have read them all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome story

Superb story.

Don't take it negatively, but just so you know Kochi is not Kerala's capital, it's Thiruvananthapuram.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I LOVE (❀) your story: β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜†β˜† (five stars)!

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Kerala’s capital is Thiruvananthapuram, not Kochi

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