All Comments on 'Shy Wife - Tricked Into Beach Exposure'

Created a powerful image for me.

That was very tame, but it was also believable. Hoping she becomes a little less shy and a little daring. Good luck.

James,

To make your story easier for us readers, split the story into paragraphs. Put about three to a normal screen. It helps the reader's eye track their location on the screen.

Use quotation marks for the dialogue. The following is as you wrote the sentence.

"Once she put it back on she didn't talk to me and asked what had gotten into me."

Just a suggestion, try,

"Once she put it back on she didn't talk to me.

Then she asked, "What had gotten into you?". My reply was just a grin.

Keep up the good work,

Sj

very believable account, hope there is more about making your wife less conservative

great story... i am a fan.. love the real stories about wifes getting slowly more comfortable. hope to hear about her progress..

While the wife's short exposure may to most seems tame , he husband came away the happy winner ! We overlook the fact that some loving relationships survive on that tame predictable level for years! A little risky behavior can add a lot of heat to a good marriage without causing a divorce !

You are off to a good start. Take the editing advice of seattlejack and use your imagination to create future variations. The best element of the story was the careful and logical development, which earlier commenters observed makes it believable and creates a mental image. Keep that up, but don't let details slow the story too much. This is a very good start and I hope to read more.

Call it tame if you will. For many, doing the same takes a lot of courage.

I can relate to this - we had been married four years when I persuaded my wife to go topless on the beach. It certainly turned me on knowing that other men could admire her lovely 36D breasts and although she was reluctant to admit it, going topless gave her a thrill as well.

In terms of what actually happens this is a rather tame story, but I find it more erotic than an account of how a shy wife is suddenly transformed into a sex mad slut who has multi-orgasmic sex with a black guy with a huge cock.

Tony

This is a very cute, loving and realistic story. It made my day.

One of my best life memories is convincing my wife to go to a nude beach and, over many visits, persuading, teasing, and tricking her into becoming more comfortable and showing more and more of herself. She really came to enjoy the freedom and the attention that she was getting, and I caught her checking out more than a few guys on the beach.

I could probably write a thesis on why this was such a turn on for me. I'll just say that we always had great sex afterwards.

My story of my wife's first topless experience was very nearly the same. I first got her to just go topless at a nude beach, on her second visit.

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Rea!istic. When I finally convinced my shy wife to go topless on the beach, I pointed out that other men were admiring her, and that it was actually turning me on , which she found quite amusing, nd it did her self confidence a world of good

We loved your story and it’s realism too. We had a pretty similar experience on our first nude beach visit. We haven’t written about it because we feared a lot o “too tame” comments, seeing the positive responses to your story inspires us to finish and submit ours now. Thanks for sharing.

Takes quite a bit of gentle coaxing to get a shy wife to voluntarily lose the bikini top, but when she does , it sure brings your cock to life.

Innocent story and good. I am inspired....