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Click here"We will have our date tomorrow." Sian whispered into Lilly's right ear. "After our date, we will come home and..." She hesitated.
"And what?" Lilly nervously asked.
"And we can do whatever you like. I... I want you." Sian said in a whisper, "I love you Lilly."
- COMMENTS
mehodge4over 2 years agoits very good lots of love and feeling the story is bulding very good a nice pace
Randee1958about 8 years agoYour writing of the evolving of the depth that their feelings, for each other. Is so vivid.
Keep up what you've got going.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoChapters 1 and 2 are perfect, well almost. Maybe a little too much detail in the furniture stuff, but the plot,storyline and how the sisters go about seducing one another is spot on. As they would say in printed books, 'a real page turner'. I loved the 'cliffhanger' at the end. Eagerly anticipating Chapter 3. Keep up the story. PLEASE?
Just_The_Guyover 9 years agoAuthorThanks everyone for the comments so far, I am already writing chapter 3 and it will be out soon... probably. Christmas is coming after all.
Keep the comments coming please, the feedback is great help.
Averygoodlayover 9 years agoLeft us high and dry with that ending, I was getting into the story when you just stopped.
Now with my bitchng over I loved your story, girl/girl sex is so hot.
Hell no leave the 14 year old out of it, it's a sure way to get kicked off here, older sister maybe but not brother.
