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penandpaperpenandpaperover 14 years ago
Good Job

Nicely done. The images of vacation and the descriptions of her were vivid. Keep on writing.

sleeplessgurlsleeplessgurlabout 13 years ago
I liked it

Good intro. Looking forward to reading part 2.

cbsummerscbsummersalmost 12 years ago
Sad but sexy

I had a breakup sex like this once. It was so sad! Happily we got together again so I didn't have to remember it as the last time.

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Please vote and send feedback on my writing - criticism is the only way to learn. I'm an ordinary guy who has been lucky enough to have an extraordinary sex life over the last 2 decades. My divorce from my first wife started me on a two decade sexual adventure, which is st...