All Comments on 'Silence'

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cbsummerscbsummersalmost 12 years ago
Sad but sexy

I had a breakup sex like this once. It was so sad! Happily we got together again so I didn't have to remember it as the last time.

sleeplessgurlsleeplessgurlabout 13 years ago
I liked it

Good intro. Looking forward to reading part 2.

penandpaperpenandpaperalmost 15 years ago
Good Job

Nicely done. The images of vacation and the descriptions of her were vivid. Keep on writing.

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Please vote and send feedback on my writing - criticism is the only way to learn. I'm an ordinary guy who has been lucky enough to have an extraordinary sex life over the last 2 decades. My divorce from my first wife started me on a two decade sexual adventure, which is st...