Silver Pt. 09

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"Oh my god, Michael!" Marlene yelled, "The next Harvest Moon is September sixteenth, and it's a Super Harvest Moon, and the sixteenth is a fricking Friday! Can you believe it, Handsome, a Friday night, Super Harvestt Moon wedding!"

"Marlene, are you positive? Last year was a Super Harvest Blood Moon, how can that be?" I asked in amazement.

"I don't know, but it is!" she screamed, running over to me and hugging me tightly. "September sixteenth, Michael, September sixteenth!" she cried.

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Well, should the story of Marlene and Michael's love continue? I will leave it up to you, the readers to decide.

I am not a medical know it all, but did my best to describe the injuries and diagnosis the best way possible to fit the story. Please feel free to leave your comments, thoughts, and constructive criticism. Please send me private emails and I will do my very best to respond!

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story! Remember, treat people with kindness, say hello to people you pass on the street, it may be the only act of kindness they receive that day...

P.S. Someone owes me some cookies!!

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beachfreakwhvbeachfreakwhvover 7 years ago
???Well, should the story of Marlene and Michael's love continue???

Yes, please please please !!!!!!!!! 😁😁😁😁

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please Sir, may we have more?

I must thank you for this wonderful story. I absolutely loved it. For some reason I usually expect an unpleasant twist during love stories, probably due to my own misfortunes in that area. However, I didn't expect it during this one and it hit like a freight train in pt. 8. I accept your artistic reasoning for the original ending, but am very glad you gave us a happier version. My life is a bit of a mess and have little hope of finding love at the moment, so I live vicariously through the characters created by talented authors such as yourself. Thank You so very much, I do hope you will continue the story.

bigdnc13bigdnc13over 7 years ago
Yes, please continue

I was unhappy about the ending in chapter 8 (I like happy endings, that's why I like this category), but accepted your explanation. So, please, please continue.

macaonghaismacaonghaisover 7 years ago
More please

Excellent way to continue the series. Please give us more.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 7 years ago
Yes ,please continue.

Chapter 8 was one of the most disappointing endings I can remember. And now you have made it right. Thank you.

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